Just wanna say, this is the absolute best title for a blog hop EVER!
The Hookers and Hangers bloghop is being hosted by the lovely ladies from Falling For Fiction! It's all about gripping your readers with excellent opening lines, and leaving them begging for more with amazing cliffhangers.
We begin with the hookers, and I am going to be using some of the openers from my latest WIP, the follow up to Game On. :D
Hooker One: Rain hammered against the window, jolting me awake.
The Hookers and Hangers bloghop is being hosted by the lovely ladies from Falling For Fiction! It's all about gripping your readers with excellent opening lines, and leaving them begging for more with amazing cliffhangers.
We begin with the hookers, and I am going to be using some of the openers from my latest WIP, the follow up to Game On. :D
Hooker One: Rain hammered against the window, jolting me awake.
Hooker Two: “One more try, I’ll do it this time, I swear!”
Hooker Three: Lunch at the Mills’
house was … a little weird to say the least.
Hooker Four: “What the hell is she doing here?”
Hooker Five: Why are
there lights on during the day? It is daytime, right? I always turn the lights
off before I go to sleep, so why are they on? Wait. Where am I?
Hooker Six: It had been three
hours since I’d seen Leon, and I was still thinking about what he said.
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Okay, that's all, now I'm off to hop around to visit the other participants! :D
P.S I'm really not sure why the words came out all different sizes up there, sorry about that!
Excellent hookers. My favourites were:
ReplyDeleteLunch at the Mills’ house was … a little weird to say the least.
and
Why are there lights on during the day? It is daytime, right? I always turn the lights off before I go to sleep, so why are they on? Wait. Where am I?
Ooo those are all good. I especially like #6! I'd have to read on!
ReplyDeleteYou have a really good voice. Very consistent. You can't beat a line that simply saids "What the hell is she doing here?" to produce some conflict. I am intrigued. Can't wait to read your hangers.
ReplyDeleteHaha. I was wondering if you had done that one purpose, with the different sizes. :) It looks cool, so well done. ;)
ReplyDeleteHave I said how excited I am for Game On?? I am SUPER excited. Love me some soccer.
These lines are great. I'm liking four :)
I thought you did the size thing on purpose. It happened to a few other people too. :)
ReplyDeleteI like #3, but there are several others I like too.
Nice job. I like the one more try line.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I especially like four and six :)
ReplyDeleteFun lines. =)
ReplyDelete#3 made me laugh out loud. Great job!
ReplyDeleteOkay, I have to know "what the hell" she was doing there.
ReplyDeletevery cool. I like 6 the best!
ReplyDeleteMy favs were Hookers three and five!
ReplyDeleteI'd read anything you write :) Great hookers! Especially #2, that was my favorite!
ReplyDeleteI totally thought you did the font thing on purpose, lol. Awesome hookers my dear! I love your opener, but I'm a sucker for rain scenes :)
ReplyDeleteVery interesting. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat ones! Two and three were my favorites. :)
ReplyDeleteI loved the first one. It immediately set my senses on high alert.
ReplyDeleteWahoo!!! Very intriguing!
ReplyDeleteI liked number 2! I want to know what she's going to do.
ReplyDeleteAwesome job, Kyra! As always.
Great work! I like no 5, I've had days like that... :)
ReplyDeleteFun! I want to know what the character is trying again in no. 2.
ReplyDeleteFive has got me ...
ReplyDeleteGame On and I have a date now that I'm back in town. :) I can't wait to read #1 and these Hookers for #2 make me really want to read it. Can't wait for the hangers.
ReplyDeleteGreat hookers! I love the first two especially!
ReplyDeleteThose are great hooks! I love the second one! :)
ReplyDeleteI'm quite intrigued by your second line. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome job! I especially love #5. "Where am I?" LOVE!
ReplyDeleteLoved the third one... what was weird about it... i want to know:)
ReplyDeleteVery interesting! I'd love to know more about what's going on in this story. Number two particularly intrigued me. Dialogue can make for great opening lines!
ReplyDeleteNumber 5 is my choice. They were all good, though.
ReplyDeletethose are all amash hits! great hooks! i want more!
ReplyDelete#'s 2 & 3 has me asking the most questions :)
ReplyDeleteNumbers 4 and 2 were my favorites. Looking forward to the hangers, and to seeing you in Write Club :) #GameFace
ReplyDeleteLove your first hooker - rain is awesome! :D
ReplyDeletealso love this one:
Why are there lights on during the day? It is daytime, right? I always turn the lights off before I go to sleep, so why are they on? Wait. Where am I?
aaaaand:
Lunch at the Mills’ house was … a little weird to say the least.
#3 & #5 really caught me. They were all good though!
ReplyDeleteUm, not sure how I missed you Monday, sorry! These are great!
ReplyDeleteWonderfully hookish Kyra. I was intrigued by them all.
ReplyDelete........dhole
Hooker 6 is a real teaser.
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