tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post4124791064861938003..comments2024-03-08T12:41:26.235+00:00Comments on Write Here, Write Now: The More Than Just a Kiss Bloghop Continues!Kyra Lennonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-74741483032238887652013-09-14T21:39:55.342+01:002013-09-14T21:39:55.342+01:00Very cute scene. Like her imaginations. :) Writer...Very cute scene. Like her imaginations. :) <a href="http://nancylarondajohnson.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Writer’s Mark</a>Chancelethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12880082145266359126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-16154798270712238322013-09-14T17:23:03.508+01:002013-09-14T17:23:03.508+01:00Great scene--makes me want to know more about the ...Great scene--makes me want to know more about the characters!Meradeth Houstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741790047121063893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-43327320062563301822013-09-14T14:53:32.174+01:002013-09-14T14:53:32.174+01:00The nervous touch added credibility to the scene. ...The nervous touch added credibility to the scene. A sweet moment!<br /><a href="http://writer-in-transit.co.za/" rel="nofollow">Writer In Transit</a>Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-55263082592753821782013-09-14T08:09:08.863+01:002013-09-14T08:09:08.863+01:00Yummy kiss :)
.....dholeYummy kiss :)<br /><br />.....dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-75111639975532254562013-09-13T03:06:53.502+01:002013-09-13T03:06:53.502+01:00Going to echo so many others here. A very sweet ki...Going to echo so many others here. A very sweet kiss.Aldrea Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652344290376563676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-75030583984983748052013-09-13T01:31:29.098+01:002013-09-13T01:31:29.098+01:00This was sweet. Like Kelly I also enjoyed the buil...This was sweet. Like Kelly I also enjoyed the build up. Her nervous behavior helped make it feel more real.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-46394532326591895702013-09-12T21:37:23.524+01:002013-09-12T21:37:23.524+01:00Aww romantic! Loved the build up!Aww romantic! Loved the build up!Kelly Steelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030019966183220952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-3147048596553135282013-09-12T18:59:39.592+01:002013-09-12T18:59:39.592+01:00I almost forgot!! I really have to have better tim...I almost forgot!! I really have to have better time management. Elizabeth Seckmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00045076826326574984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-67817832064251334672013-09-12T17:53:54.650+01:002013-09-12T17:53:54.650+01:00Yes, you learn by doing:-)Yes, you learn by doing:-)jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-3980245456025834562013-09-12T17:34:14.787+01:002013-09-12T17:34:14.787+01:00Great snippet, Kyra! Love how it Displays their ne...Great snippet, Kyra! Love how it Displays their nervousness about expectations, then when they kiss at least, it's perfect ! Cecilia Roberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04416564789369523352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-39162241567044672882013-09-12T17:02:25.941+01:002013-09-12T17:02:25.941+01:00What a sweet kiss!What a sweet kiss!Sherry Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07844837212122243321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-6930548656682626722013-09-12T08:29:25.232+01:002013-09-12T08:29:25.232+01:00Love this! The characterization comes through str...Love this! The characterization comes through strong, and I like that both of them were nervous. That's realistic to me.L.G. Keltnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07624902347418621283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-9338480205032121572013-09-11T20:20:29.075+01:002013-09-11T20:20:29.075+01:00I hope my wife undresses me with her mind. Wait, d...I hope my wife undresses me with her mind. Wait, did I say that out loud...?Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-11711003479808865112013-09-11T16:25:20.561+01:002013-09-11T16:25:20.561+01:00It's so refreshing to read a first kiss scene ...It's so refreshing to read a first kiss scene where the guy is just as nervous as the girl. Kudos to you, Kyra, for changing it up and nailing the emotion :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-41548535094781476392013-09-11T15:45:48.611+01:002013-09-11T15:45:48.611+01:00Aww. I love this.Aww. I love this.ilimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17899071063752311737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-61517657500418052402013-09-11T15:42:31.380+01:002013-09-11T15:42:31.380+01:00I sadly haven't read Blindsided yet. I have it...I sadly haven't read Blindsided yet. I have it—I just haven't read it yet.<br /><br />But this scene was fantastic. Very sweet.M.J. Fifieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15626475963328519693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-36579989769195690672013-09-11T15:34:48.058+01:002013-09-11T15:34:48.058+01:00This is such a sweet kiss! :)This is such a sweet kiss! :)Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-62959128076623494512013-09-11T14:32:57.862+01:002013-09-11T14:32:57.862+01:00So sweet (and hot)! Lovely. I'm such a big fan...So sweet (and hot)! Lovely. I'm such a big fan of Jesse. :)Meredithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00462382909938737612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-22049978741869702842013-09-11T14:12:25.273+01:002013-09-11T14:12:25.273+01:00Very sweet scene. Very sweet scene. T. Powell Coltrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02160774009926623671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-381195109897308034.post-37860604486671882572013-09-11T11:56:27.812+01:002013-09-11T11:56:27.812+01:00Awww lovey dovey hehehe.Awww lovey dovey hehehe.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com